Born in a Flash

This is my Gentle April 2017 entry. For the entirety of the month of April I languished, unable to think of what to write for my contest entry. Then I listened to this song while trying to get some inspiration:

And the idea came to me. The story is much longer, but this will do for now.

Born in a Flash

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2 thoughts on “Born in a Flash

  1. Yes, it felt like there should be more story to it. It was entirely great on its own, the inception, the stumbling around and realization, the riddle-solving. Great pace, great tension. But I definitely wanted more after this, like… it has to be a series, even just a few episodes. It’s not incomplete, mind, it’s not the first third of a complete story, but it definitely sets the stage for further developments.

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